i think that your presentation was quite good however i thought you should have made it more colourful, bold, and out their over all i thought it was very good keep it up jords (your wifey ) xx
Jordans presentation was ok but I feel he had more pictures rather than information that is where his presentation lackedd umff, it was also a very boring presentation but started off very well. :D
I like the presentation, for example, the images and the clips were eye catching and interesting. The disadvantage was that you weren't excited and more into your work as some other people (e.g. me) however I like your presentation the best so far.
Your presentation was good however I could tell that you didn't really rehearse. I think if you actually did rehears your presentation you would have spoken more clearly. The information was good and I like all the pictures you used in the presentation.
Jordan presentation was good it had information and depth in Walters life although i felt it was rushed he didn't speak too clearly but i enjoyed it but from the blog i gathered who Walt was and his legacy.
Jordon Williams, good presentation.You managed to ad lib well. I think that your presentation could have perhaps done with containing more written information about Walt Disney as this would have clearly demonstrated your research. In future try and be more professional when you are giving a presentation, eg stand up straight, make eye contact with the audience and project your voice. Good start.
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ReplyDeletei think that your presentation was quite good however i thought you should have made it more colourful, bold, and out their over all i thought it was very good keep it up jords (your wifey ) xx
ReplyDeleteJordans presentation was ok but I feel he had more pictures rather than information that is where his presentation lackedd umff, it was also a very boring presentation but started off very well. :D
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ReplyDeleteI like the presentation, for example, the images and the clips were eye catching and interesting. The disadvantage was that you weren't excited and more into your work as some other people (e.g. me) however I like your presentation the best so far.
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ReplyDeleteYour presentation was good however I could tell that you didn't really rehearse. I think if you actually did rehears your presentation you would have spoken more clearly. The information was good and I like all the pictures you used in the presentation.
ReplyDeleteJordan presentation was good it had information and depth in Walters life although i felt it was rushed he didn't speak too clearly but i enjoyed it but from the blog i gathered who Walt was and his legacy.
ReplyDeleteJordon Williams, good presentation.You managed to ad lib well. I think that your presentation could have perhaps done with containing more written information about Walt Disney as this would have clearly demonstrated your research. In future try and be more professional when you are giving a presentation, eg stand up straight, make eye contact with the audience and project your voice. Good start.
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